Tuesday 17 March 2015

BDM 125 Script Outline V2

1. EXT, RIVERSIDE - DAWN


Daelin is reading a book to his son Haron, they both have dark black hair. the book is about the sun and the moon meeting and turning the land dark. Haron asks if the sun and moon will meet again. Daelin says they are bound to.


2. EXT, OUTSIDE AN INN - NIGHT


Daelin has murdered a man.
Haron wants to know why he deserved to die.
Daelin argues that all powerful men deserve to die, as he takes the man's money and clothes.


3. EXT, COUNTRY ROAD - DAY


We see a man is tied to a tree stump, Daelin is pressuring ten yr old Haron to kill the man, he refuses and tries to run.
After a small tussle Haron has been badly burnt on his arms but manages to escape.


4. EXT, FOREST - NIGHT


There is a big blue explosion. We hear shouts and dogs barking.
An old man is running and is visibly hurt. His clothes are torn and burnt.


We see he is making vivid footprints in the mud.


We see him walk out into a moon lit clearing where he collapses under a tree and blacks out. The shouts and barking have stopped.


The old man wakes to find that he has been poisoned and there is a spreading blue wound on his side. His skin is peeling in the area.


He has no water or food, and can not even stand, he is going to die.


5. EXT, FOREST - DAY


A man in a dark cloak is examining the aftermath of an explosion, there is a blue liquid splattered everywhere. He quickly ascends a nearby tree. Skipping from one branch to the next.


We see the man nestled in the tree, he is looking over a string of footprints in the mud on the forest floor.
He suddenly drops and runs following the footprints


6. EXT, FOREST CLEARING - DAY


The old man hasn’t moved, it begins to rain. He slumps and lets the rain cleanse him


7. EXT, FOREST CLEARING - DAY


The Man in the black cloak has come to the end of the trail; a clearing where he sees a old man and hides.


He pulls out a roll of paper and observes a drawing of a face.
The drawing is labeled as (Wanted! $10,000 reward!)
He compares the drawing to the man in the clearing again and again


He draws his knife, we see a scar rippling up his arm. He hesitates.


8. EXT, COUNTRY ROAD - DAY, FLASHBACK


Haron is standing over a man tied to a tree trunk. His father is telling him to kill the man. Haron calls his father a murderer and shouts that he never wants to be like him. He is crying as he runs away.


END FLASHBACK


9. EXT, SPACE


we see the moon orbiting the planet and the sun shining bright in the background.


we see that the moon is about to cross into the path of the sun.


A shadow is developing on the planet


10. EXT, FOREST CLEARING - DAY


Haron runs out of hiding towards the old man, who lifts his head at the noise.


The elder is stunned at the sight of Haron, he rolls out of the way of a sword swing.


He shouts for haron to stop as he gets to his feet.
He manages to disarm Haron and kick him down, he draws a knife.


Harons hood has fallen revealing his black hair. He charges the old man who flicks the knife around in his hand, the point is facing his own heart.


Haron impacts him, he gasps and is still.
Haron steps back abruptly. we see the knife is plunged in to the elders chest, he slumps then falls forward and crumbles to the soil.


Haron breathes deeply, he goes pale. He sees the old mans bag and looks though it.


He finds a book, it is the book his father used to read to him as a child. Haron pulls back the hood of the old man revealing his black hair.


We see land grow darker. A solar eclipse is unfolding.


We see the soil go black with blood around Daelin’s body, it fills the screen.